Lizzie down for the
count…finally! Zoe Triumphs!
vs
Stephanie, Rushmi, Jon,
Emily, Norma
Stephanie: From the Desk of Zoe Washington is
definitely a book I would recommend to younger students. I feel like it lightly
broached important and relevant topics in a manner that would be palatable to
children without being too intense or heavy. I, however, also agree with Norma
regarding it’s underdevelopment with regards to plot and resolution, which was
a tad disappointing. When reading it, I felt like it was missing a few chapters.
The Borden Murders is definitely not a book I would read out of choice. I did find it
harder to read and engage with at first due to the choppy narrative and
different perspectives regarding the case. Despite my initial hesitation and
irritation, I eventually found myself looking forward to reading it, which I
feel attests to how good a book it actually is. I found myself talking to my
husband about the case and how crime scene technology has developed over time.
I also enjoyed the photos and the end of the book, where it talks about life
after the trial.
Although From the Desk of Zoe Washington
is an easier read and the type of story I would normally be interested in, I
vote for The Borden Murders this round.
Rushmi: From
the Desk of Zoe Washington is a feel good read that you know will have a happy
ending...which kind of leaves you wanting more from the book. The book
takes a straightforward path with the main storyline, which turns out better
than expected, but doesn’t really dare to elaborate on the side stories, such
as the baking show and apprenticeship, the “boy” friend, or the lies told to
move the story along. In the end, it is an easy read, and good for middle
school kids. The fact that the main character has motivation to meet her goals
would be inspiring for kids, as is the fact that this book is very recent and
mentions current events such as Black Lives Matter, relevant to the story
seeing as the main character is a visible minority from a mixed family. Because
it is current, you almost want to search up alongside Zoe to find out if there
is truth to any of the story.
The Borden Murders has you wondering with suspicion from the very get go. As
part of history, it is interesting for readers to learn about how the people at
that time lived, and what crime scene investigation was like. However, there
are so many characters that you need to check the reference pages, along with
the photos of the characters and the setting. What might help is a timeline of
events at some point because things get fairly confusing. In the end, it is up
to the reader to put together the facts of how the evidence was provided to
make their own decision. The one thing you do know all along is that this
book probably won’t be appropriate for school aged kids.
For this round, I nominate From the Desk of Zoe
Washington to move to the next round.
Emily: As
a fan of crime and courtroom dramas, I was quite curious heading into The
Borden Murders, especially since I was unfamiliar with the Lizzie Borden
case. However, as I started reading, I found the shift in narrative voice from
historical retelling, to analysis and extra background information to be
jarring. It took me right out of the momentum of the story. If I were reading
this book just for my own enjoyment, I don’t think I would have finished it.
In terms of the actual
case, I found it was bogged down by the overabundance of details. Every piece
of evidence or non-evidence was described by multiple witnesses, often with
conflicting reports. In addition to this, witnesses contradicted each other and
themselves so frequently that any “big reveal” lacked impact. I understand
wanting to be historically accurate, but for me, the hyper-attention to detail
made the case much more difficult to follow.
The final straw for me
was the ending, or really the non-ending of we still don’t know if Lizzie
Borden did it, and probably never will. This was frustrating for me after
investing the time in reading the book. I kept expecting all
of the extra evidence and detailed analysis to lead to something, but it never
did.
From the Desk of Zoe
Washington is an easy, feel good read with a main
character that is easy to root for. This novel was much easier for me to get
into in terms of writing style and flow, and I was quickly invested in the
story of Zoe developing a relationship with her biological father.
The book isn’t
perfect. The baking subplot felt a bit out of place in the context of the main
storyline, especially since there isn’t much of a payoff with the internship or
baking show audition.
The ending also felt
slightly rushed. The author spends quite a bit of time developing the
relationship between Zoe and her father, her investigation into his innocence,
and the build up of all the secrets characters have been keeping from each
other. But in the end when all is revealed, there seems to be a rush to tie up
all the story threads, so you don’t feel the weight of the consequences to
Zoe’s choices. Because of this, the ultimate resolution doesn’t feel as earned
as it could have.
The story is sweet,
despite its flaws and I can see my students enjoying this book.
For this round, I vote
From the Desk of Zoe Washington to move forward.
Norma: Zoe is an easy
read. The story is simplistic and everything wraps up too quickly and
positively with a big bow. I would have liked more from the fallout from
Zoe lying to her parents and Grandma and from breaking the rules; from Grandma
aiding her in the deceit, from mom keeping things from Zoe. There didn’t
seem to be any real consequences.Such a build up and then a let down in how
quickly everything was resolved. Judgement is reserved as to which book will
move on.
The Borden Murders was a little more difficult
to read as it wove facts of the case and narrative in an interesting way.
I was drawn to the story because although I was familiar with the story
of Lizzie Borden it was just very superficially. I learned a lot about
the judicial system of the day. This book will appeal to kids who love
mysteries and trying to find solutions. There were many twists and turns
to keep the reader interested.
For me, I vote to move Lizzie Borden forward!
Jon: Zoe
was definitely the superior book. It was a smooth read, it often left
chapters on a cliffhanger to keep you interested and advancing the story.
It is a girl who slowly finds out that her father, who has been in prison for
her entire existence, has been trying to play an active role in her life this
whole time. She wants to build the relationship, but has to do so in
secret, as her mother wants him to play no role in her life.
There are numerous flaws and plot holes. I
find the backdrop of Zoe wanting to win the kid’s baking championship to be a
chore to read through. The second I entered a page where she was
gathering baking materials, all I could think was “Oh no… not again… This is
the next six pages of my life… Why does this keep happening…” I get
that the author used this as a time for Zoe’s self-reflection or important
conversations, but it seemed that every other chapter she was baking something
new. Also, for a girl who wants to enter the Kid’s Baking Championship,
she knows how to do surprisingly little without the use of someone else’s
cookbook.
Another issue that I had was how easy it was for
a 12-year-old girl to resolve everything. It literally took five minutes
for her to find a solution to certain problems, whereas professionals couldn’t
do it with time, money, and resources? I’m not buying it.
But no matter the issue in Zoe, it didn’t come
close to the dry read that was The Borden Murders. I will
preface this by stating that I love a good murder mystery. There is an
entire channel dedicated to those shows where someone disappears, and they give
a full hour breaking down the sequences of events, examining clues and
suspects, and my favorite part is always right before the final commercial
break when they say “When we come back, detectives find the clue that breaks
this case wide open.” And the excitement builds finding out
what mistake the criminal makes to get caught.
This was the opposite of that. This was “And
on every page we will show you one more clue and piece of evidence that leads
nowhere or ultimately has nothing to do with the case.” They brought
in information under the guise that it would lead somewhere, but it ultimately
never did.
It may be that I had certain expectations for
the book, but one of the more off-putting liberties the author took was adding
detail that nobody could have possibly known. How certain dialogue was
said, what somebody doing when nobody was around, motivations for certain characters,
etc. It is as if the true story happened, that story was turned into a
film with many artistic licenses taken, and that film was turned back into a
story that became The Borden Murders.
My vote goes for From the Desk of Zoe
Washington.