Ebb & Flow vs The Season of Styx Mallone
Vanessa and Debbie: Well I wanted to like Styx Malone, I really did. At first I
thought I was reading a re-telling of One Red Paper Clip but kid style. But
what I found was a story that was all over the place and IMHO, not well
written. It was a struggle just to finish. I really did want to like it.... Then I read
Ebb & Flow and my faith in a good story returned. Written in verse,
it is a tale of a student who made some bad choices after hooking up with some
“bad kids” and how he spent a summer at his Gramma’s place learning to take
ownership of his actions. I think the Gramma is the real hero of this
story - she loves her grandson unconditionally but doesn’t let him get away
with anything. For me, there is no contest....Ebb&Flow for the win!
Norma: Started
Ebb and Flow, got right into the story and format and finished the book
quickly. It was an easy read in a format that would appeal to young readers. The story was very engaging. I was
excited to get into reading The Season of Styx Malone. I started the book and kept waiting for it to
amp up but it dragged on and on. I had a hard time finishing it as it
lost its appeal. My vote is for Ebb and
Flow for the win!
Kim: Read
Heather Smith’s Ebb & Flow first because I am usually not a huge fan
of books in verse (although the sun and her flowers by rupi kaur turned
my world rotating in a different direction) and I thought I would get it out of
the way and get to Styx Malone - the good book. Wow, I could not have
been more wrong!
Ebb & Flow was beautiful in so many ways and dealt with heavy, deep themes
that would serve up delicious discussion/conversations with teens. The
relationship between Jett and his “cotton candy granny” is tender,
nonjudgmental and just what he needs to redirect him to a better path. She
allows Jett the freedom to look at who he is and who he wants to be. “... Junior
made Jett do lots of bad things. Grandma looked right through me. Great
story… if you like fairy tales.” I read it twice because it was so well
written.
The Season of Styx Malone was
simple and underdeveloped. I was hoping to love Styx and see all his
complexities. None of that happened.
My vote - hands down - is Ebb &
Flow.
Joelle: Okay, this is going to be an unpopular thought: I thought Ebb
and Flow was a bit pretentious with the verse format. I think many of
the truly beautiful lines: “They came like arrows shot from a bow.
Fast, mean and straight for the heart.
If only they came like boomerangs instead. Boomerangs go back
where they came from.” “...When I was a good person; when people with no teeth
made me sad,” could all have been just as beautiful in prose. So I
thought the verse style made it rather gimmicky, but it clearly couldn’t
stretch into a prose novel. The riff was very Touching Spirit Bear,
with a grandmother and a protagonist once removed from violence. Growing
up I knew a kid like Junior; he lived in a shack, his dad beat him, he was violent
and tried to push his pain onto the world around him, and reading Ebb and
Flow I could only see him and wonder what ever became of him, if
anything. It was personally affecting and the language was occasionally
gorgeous. Even if the ending was a little
unsatisfying, I don’t know how else it could have happened; it ended like real
life--messy and more than a little unfinished. I was glad by the end
though that Jett hadn’t done all of the terrible things you imagine all the way
along.
Season of Styx Malone was empty. I had no real feelings for any of the
characters; I didn’t care what happened to them. The whole thing seemed
so unlikely, and I had difficulty imagining their world because it was so
simple. I enjoyed the brief appearance of Pixie but that was it. I definitely have to vote with Ebb and
Flow for sure!
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