We wanted to create a way where we could read a few books, learn about many titles and have fun doing it! The tournament style reading of the Mighty Smackdown means that in the first round each participant reads two books, discusses both in a blog post, selecting one book to move on to the next round. Teachers are asked to commit to one round but most, if not all, continue on. We will read to the end when we will have only one book left standing!
Wednesday, May 18, 2022
That's As Close As We Can Get And Still Declare The Winner!
It always fills my withered heart with joy when the three finalists of Smackdown are all so worthy of attention and an audience. You all may not completely agree but I found the finalists to be all MIGHTY contenders. May is a time when ships go down metaphorically speaking. Many of our most eager bloggers and readers are spinning away right now in a distant universe. We had a few schools who did not vote - yet so many of you who took time to come up with criteria and pick a winner. This year's winner was put over the top with just ONE vote. Dragon Hoops wins again (life and art right?) by one. Final scores: 21 Dragons 20 Furia 13 Cranes. Thanks to all our participants who got to see first hand that book choice needs to be the real winner in any battle!
Monday, May 16, 2022
All good things must come to an end...
Another year, another Smackdown.... Here's how it rolled out for Team Sweet Grass:
Vanessa: So much has been said already about these three. For me, Dragon Hoops was a clear third place (and to be honest, lots of other books should have been here before it). I loved Furia and Land of Cranes - they both deserve to be here. And while Land of Cranes could be in my library here at school, I’m picking Furia for the win.
Norma: I don’t like graphic novels but Dragon Hoops was one of the first graphic novels that I can appreciate. I loved Furia and Land of the Cranes. I won’t be disappointed if either was the eventual winner. For me though my choice for the win is Land of the Cranes. It gave me a glimpse into the camps and highlighted the good in people in spite of their circumstances.
Mel:I loved “Land of the Cranes” - her voice telling the story and how she saw things really connected with me. That’s my winner. “Furia” was obviously targeted at a different audience and I thought it was good too although I had to read about 5 chapters before I started to feel into that story (unlike “Cranes” which had me at “Hello”). I like Basketball and sports in general. I love History - especially looking at stories and events from a 3D perspective. BUT . NO. NO. I can not take in that story in pictures. So “Dragon” isn’t a pick for me on any ballot.
Rushmi: I liked Furia and reading about her story, even the expected happy ending. However, the book I would allow to take up some real estate on my bookshelf is Land of Cranes. The topic is not common, and I think the advocacy it brings is excellent. It can reach a number of targeted audiences. It is well written in verse which actually adds to the beauty of the story, and I would think about this character over time because her story made an impact. So, Land of Cranes holds my vote.
Stephanie: I absolutely loved Furia, especially because it took place in Rosario, Argentina and so I felt a special connection to the cultural aspects. I thought the female protagonist was authentic and the storyline interesting. I was immediately hooked by the narrative and it was very eye opening for me to see the more machista side of the Argentine culture because I’ve always studied about the strong females like Las Madres de la plaza de mayo and seen first hand from my mother-in-law’s example, how powerful and effective they have been at evoking change. Despite all of the wonderful reasons why I could choose Furia, my pick is still Land of Cranes. The story is heartbreaking and beautifully told and should be shared with as wide of an audience as possible:)
Emily: Dragon Hoops was okay, but the more I reflect on it, the more frustrated I am that it made it this far. I loved both Land of the Cranes and Furia and I would be happy with either book winning. Land of the Cranes is a painful, beautiful and necessary book, but I’m not sure it’s a book I’ll be able to reread anytime soon. It did take a few chapters for Furia to really grab me, but once it did, I was very invested in the story. I loved Camila’s story of overcoming the expectations and limitations placed upon her. When I think of Furia, the word that comes to mind is “triumphant”. Furia is my pick to win.
Jon: Furia started out strong, but my interest began to wane halfway through. More to come, but my pick is Land of Cranes. Dragon Hoops second place, but Furia didn’t finish as strong as it started.
Cranes - 5, Furia -2
Wednesday, April 20, 2022
Worst Blog Ever, but Yay for Dragon Hoops
In a month that has been an uninterrupted flurry
(weather punning partially intended) it’s maybe no surprise that we struggled
to find time other than through some disjointed email correspondence to really
sink into what may have indeed been a smackworthy battle. I’m somewhat more
surprised that after an extended and necessary break for us all, I somehow
completely forgot to craft a blog until now. So, no craft really, but here’s
where we landed. I think our QE team clearly held both books in high regard and
we had good arguments for both to go through. Both books are carefully crafted
and deal with a range of significant issues that are relevant to our students.
In regard to Me and Banksy, There was a sense that while the larger
issue of privacy, particularly in the cyber world, was one our kids at the high
school would be eager to engage with, some of the specific socio-economic
context and (This is just me) the overly cutesy pitter patter dialogue, may not
speak to our kids quite as much. This is our second sitting with Dragon Hoops
and I think it confirmed our sense that it is a book that has broad appeal -
both in content and in form - for our students. We’d like to see Dragon
Hoops move on into the final round.
Tuesday, April 19, 2022
Ellerslie Campus votes for Land of the Cranes!
For whatever reason, we had a hard time getting into Furia this round. The details were believable and realistic... the coming of age premise mixed with the constant pressures to fit into societal norms and familial expectations is one that will resonate with many readers... I'd definitely recommend this novel to older Div 3 and 4 students.
"Trigger warnings: deportation, ICE, family separation, physical and emotional abuse, child abuse, recollection of sexual assault, racist and xenophobic slurs'
Thursday, April 14, 2022
Banksy vs. Dragon Hoops
I liked both books this round, and I think I could recommend either to my students. My vote goes to Dragon Hoops this round, simply because I know it will be a popular choice with many students who don't like reading but like basketball. Right now I have two boys asking me for it every time they come in, when normally they just fake read during our independent reading time. Banksy is a better novel overall, but Dragon Hoops will be more popular with kids.
Wednesday, April 13, 2022
The Kids from Sweet Grass blog about:
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Vanessa: I’ll make this quick, my vote is for Banksy. Although Dragon Hoops was fine, I have read the last four books now and the other 2 (Land of Cranes and Furia) are both better than these two. So whatever goes out on the side will be my Zombie pick. Much has been said about Banksy and Hoops in previous rounds. Banksy was better. That is all.
Norma: Dragon hoops was a graphic novel that I did appreciate. I think a lot of that had to do with a subject area that was of interest to me. I enjoyed Banksy as well. My vote is for Banksy,
Mel: Banksy all the way on these two. It did take me about half-way through to start to like it but felt it picked up as things went along. NO to Graphic Novels for me. I am confused by characters and storylines when a story is told with pictures. I admit it. I give up. I would have enjoyed the story if it was written out. Land of the Cranes is still my pick (even over Banksy).
Emily: Dragon Hoops was fine. The sections that dealt with the history of basketball were cool to read, but the narrative failed to grip me. Banksy hooked me right from the beginning. I was far more invested in this story, and it was a much more satisfying book to read. I vote Banksy.
Stephanie: Well, I have surprised myself with this one. I loved the book Me and Banksy; however, my vote is for Dragon Hoops. I thought Dragon Hoops was cleverly written. I actually thought the meta techniques of the author and his writing process were interesting. It allowed us to see the choices that a writer has to make and how really difficult the Phelps history was for him to tell, especially when no verdict was officially given and all of the players that he knew personally had such a different impression of him. I was so engaged in all of the different histories of basketball. I honestly couldn’t put the book down, and Lionel stole the book from me on numerous occasions after constantly sneak-reading over my shoulder. Clearly, it’s an excellent book, if a 4 foot 11 Comparative Literature major and lover of art chooses it over Me and Banksy!!
Rushmi: I can appreciate a book about sports, and learn the history as we go. In the form of a graphic novel, it was easier to learn the history too. However, reading about an author who doesn’t know what to write about for the duration of the book did not win me over, and my interest fizzled out. Bansky on the other hand had me asking more and more questions, wanting to find out about the true Bansky. The typical highschool happy ending was regular but overall this one takes my vote.
Jon: Read Dragon Hoops, did not finish Banksy therefore, abstained from voting at the time of publishing.
Monday, February 28, 2022
Late to the blogging and I now feel like this post has to become a defense of why Traci Chee's We are Not Free should be our zombie pick!
We've had some meh selections this year - four books we didn't love. This bracket changed that. These are both great books.
Although we're not all fans of multi-narrator books, we all agreed We are Not Free was well crafted. The different viewpoints drew us in and kept us reading. We enjoyed that the narrators didn't retell the same parts but moved the story forward. The chart of characters at the beginning helped us to keep track of who was who. We loved how Chee experimented with different styles for the different voices - verse, letters, etc. The varying styles really mirrored how individual the experience was for internees. Some of us grew attached to the characters and wanted more from their perspectives. More than one reviewer was moved to tears by the powerful narrative.
Although one can be intellectually aware of Japanese internment camps in Canada and the US, a book this well written shows us, emotionally, what it was like. The war sections were very powerful. I will be recommending this one to my 9s next year when we talk about Canada's internment camps in WWI and II. The exploration of racism makes it an important book for any classroom.
We liked Me and Banksy too. It was well written and dealt with some important topics. A Canadian setting is a nice change. It's an interesting exploration of topic we probably don't give enough though to - surveillance. The exploration of the power of art and of Banksy in particular was interesting. We appreciate the interwoven nature of Banksy and how people can connect social movement/reform through multiple avenues such as art, There's a great lesson about the importance of using one's voice.
The main character is a strong female lead. The secondary characters were not as appealing to some reviewers. We wish the principal had been given a more unlikable back story - as educators, as moms, some of us felt sorry for her and couldn't root for her demise; young readers may not have that problem! Some of the surveillance aspects / security concept were a bit incredulous.
I appreciated that the girls realized the problem was too big for them and went to the principal for help. I know it's a more exciting story when the young protagonists take on the problem without adult help, but I like that the author showcased that as a way to get help and then got around it to still write the exciting story of the kids having to fix the problem themselves.
Overall, our vote was for We Are Not Free. It's a great story; it's well-written, and the themes are so important. Maybe it has a future as a zombie pick.
Renee, Nikki, Kelly, Krystal, Evelyn
Sunday, February 27, 2022
The King Was Our Jam
Well, befitting this frenetic time of year,
we struggled to find time to get into any in-depth conversation about these two
books, but it was very clear that it was The
King of Jam Sandwiches that won the day for us, even though I think we all
really liked The Land of the Cranes,
as well. I am a sucker for books where kindness wins the day and that happens
over and over in a novel with some legitimate darkness and sadness. You don’t
have to teach very long before you get to know a few Robbies and Harmonys and
those stories always stay with you, even if, and perhaps because, they aren’t
quite so neatly packaged as these two characters. That isn’t meant as a
criticism. This is a book for kids and I think Eric Walters fundamentally gets
kids and knows that young people - and I could see this book being read right
from upper elementary through to high school - will empathize with the
characters he created. Our Robbies and Harmony don’t always speak as
eloquently, but I think a book like this really inspires us to keep going in
trying to draw out those stories and create that web of support and protection
around our most vulnerable students.
We feel fortunate to have a chance to read both books, but our vote here at QE goes to The King of Jam Sandwiches.
We Are Not Free competes against Me And Banksy
I
was almost inspired to try my hand at poetry (like a group did earlier this week) but decided I will keep
this short and simple. Both books are worthy reads with themes that
deserve exploration. Me And Banksy highlights the chronic way we are
"watched" in our current society and asks us to challenge the belief
that we are safer through this surveillance. Exploring what does it mean
to be free through the book We Are Not Free is timely because of many recent
national and world events. The multiple viewpoints of the characters
presented in We Are Not Free pulled me and kept the pages turning
quickly. My vote is for We are Not Free (I know it is not the same vote as others in the group).
Friday, February 25, 2022
Me and Banksy vs. We Are Not Free
This was a tough choice for our group, as both texts were really engaging for very different reasons. We Are Not Free offered a unique perspective that hasn't had a lot of coverage in YA literature that I've read. For many students, reading about the Japanese internment in America would be an eye-opening experience, especially paired with discussions about similarities in Canada. The multiple narrators were interesting, and even though each of them only got a chapter, I felt that I really connected to many of the characters. Me and Banksy was engaging for entirely different reasons. The conflict in this story felt very topical and current and felt like it would be very easily relatable for students. The narrator, Dominica, was SO ENGAGING and I found myself rooting for her every step of the way. In the end, we voted for Me and Banksy because we thought it would have a broader readership among our students, but we will definitely book-talk We Are Not Free and encourage everyone to read it!
Haiku Review
My kids know I love haikus. I like how it forces you to play with words, rearrange, come up with alternatives, figure out how to say the most you can within constraints. So in that light I think we will some up ABMs response with the Haiku Review:
Heart lifts to talk books
Where women push boundaries
Imposed by others
I suppose I will also include the necessaries. Furia for the win...but not unanimous. Fantasy is a hard read for some of our teachers though we acknowledge many students love it. The Gilded Ones has many ultra violent sections that make some teachers hesitant to lend it out. Furia simply showed us a unique setting and what sealed the deal, even more importantly, was a unique character choice supporting this classic t-shirt quote: Feminism: the Radical Notion that Women Should have the Same Social, Economic & Political Rights as Men
Thursday, February 24, 2022
Land of Cranes flies away with the vote....
LAND OF CRANES vs KING OF JAM SANDWICHES
A Unanimous vote!
Vanessa: Both very quick reads and both very different. I loved King of Jam Sandwiches and can totally see kids at my school liking it. There were some laugh out loud moments in the beginning. It is going to be a classic upper elementary read. Land of Cranes, written in verse (admittedly not my favorite format), was an emotional journey that really showed the reality behind kids trapped at border crossings. For me, the story was compelling and heart-wrenching. I can see how both books moved forward in previous rounds but now. head to head, Land of Cranes is the clear winner for me.Norma: I first read King of Jam Sandwiches and loved it. Great for elementary schools. I then read Land of the Cranes and also loved it. This format is definitely growing on me too. The more compelling story for me, and my choice to move ahead, is Land of the Cranes. The story is a timely one and provides a perspective that will be easily accessible to young readers.
Mel: I liked both of these but my winner is “Land of the Cranes”. This story reminded me of “American Grafitti” which I also liked. I loved the flow of the language and that it was written in verse from her perspective. She had big insights into the adults and issues around her and I loved how she understood them from a simple (but profound) place. Reminds us that kids DO get what’s going on around them even if they miss the bigger complexities. (I could argue a little for the Jam book too but feel like it’s theme is familiar already in other books we’ve read so far).
Steph: I too vote for Land of the Cranes. Although I thought King of Jam Sandwiches was excellent and would highly recommend it, Land of Cranes was absolutely beautiful. I actually enjoy verse because I think it takes special skill to paint these poignant images with so few words. The book made me cry on more than one occasion and there are images that will stay with me forever.
Rushmi: The King of Jam Sandwiches was a great read, but my vote goes to Land of Cranes. Both have few characters but the King was fairly simplistic. I enjoyed reading through to see how it ended. Cranes is a more intense topic, and leaves lots to think about, lots to be thankful for, and lends itself to more conversation around current events as well as diversity. The imagery is beautiful and the story tugs at the heart. My vote is for Land of the Cranes.
Emily: King of Jam Sandwiches is funny and heartfelt while still dealing with serious topics. I really enjoyed the story of friendship, and how topics of abandonment and neglect were dealt with in a respectful and age appropriate way.
Normally I hate novels in verse. The format irritates me, and I find myself wishing for a “regular” novel the entire time I’m reading. But with Land of the Cranes, after the first 15 pages I was sucked into the story of Betita and her family’s struggle. This book was painfully beautiful, and so powerful. I was unprepared for the emotional response I had to this book, and it has quickly become one of my favorites of the Smackdown so far.
My vote is for Land of the Cranes.
Jon: Despite how much I don’t care for book-in-verse, Land of Cranes is a story that not only needs to be told, but needs to be heard. It did not shy away from the horrors committed, but also delivered them in palatable pieces. The mixture of Spanish and English was also nice- someone clearly trying to retain who they are is a struggle felt by many. Jam Sandwiches was just okay…It’s downfall was playing too heavily into the trope
Renae (DDM) - I liked both books as well, and I’d include both in my classroom libraries for junior high. King of Jam Sandwiches reminded me a lot of another great book that was on last year’s YRCA list called No Fixed Address–either of these titles would be great read alouds for a grade 7 class. Land of the Cranes was a beautifully written book with strong imagery. I think it is an important story to be told and is my pick to move forward to the next round.
Tuesday, February 22, 2022
Dragon Hoops vs Electric Kingdom!
Dragon Hoops drew me in immediately. This was a big surprise as I not only dislike sports but tend not to like many graphic novels. There was something about Yang's writing that made me care about this team and want to know more about his unique and unexpected journey with them. I learned so much about basketball and even a bit about history and found myself really rooting for the characters. The Electric Kingdom, however, was very confusing and hard to keep track of who was who. I often felt frustrated that I couldn't recall the back story of a particular character and who they were connected to as just too many characters were coming up. I also am so tired of the dystopic, end of the world, narrative so it felt tiresome at times. What I did like about Electric Kingdom was it's interesting spin on this apocalyptic world. Having said that, it honestly felt too heavy to read at times. I actually felt pained by it. Yet, I really needed to know how it ends (more on that in a minute) so I guess the author did a good job in pulling the reader in. However, much like the story, the ending was confusing and I'm still not sure what happened. Thus, our team's vote goes to Dragon Hoops.
Sunday, January 9, 2022
Furia Wins The Day
Well, this was not a particularly close call
for us. We did not have one person go to bat for The Intruder in this one. I will say that The Intruder struck me as a good, somewhat old fashioned narrative,
that our kids maybe don’t get exposed to enough in their formative years these
days. Even Disney kids shows can spend more time raising an ironic eyebrow than
actually engaging an audience in the plot. So, I think there are kids that will
definitely find this to be a compelling read and I think they will like young
Margot. She’s dealing with unimaginable trauma, but we still see the person she
is shining through, even if the very insular nature of her circumstances
throughout the novel maybe limits the depth of her character. I think a lot of
kids would keep reading through this just to find out exactly what is going on,
even if all of them might not be satisfied with the ending.
Camila (Furia) is another character that kids
will be drawn to. Her life, too, is complex and she is another strong character
who will inspire both empathy and admiration. I have played and coached soccer
my entire life and I certainly think that any kid who is “futbol-obsessed” (as
our author is described on the book jacket) would find both the descriptions of
play and the rags to riches rise to Serie A for Diego to be a compelling
backdrop for Furia’s complex
narrative. I don’t think, however, (much like Dragon Hoops in the first round) a reader would need to have much,
if any, background in sport to still find this an engaging read, While the
storyline is interesting in itself and kids will legitimately keep reading to
find out where everything is going, at the heart of the narrative is a social
justice warrior. This is a story rooted in time and place, and I suspect that an interview with the author would
provide us with stories from her youth in Argentina that would be every bit as
gripping as this novel. Soccer may be the driving force for Camila to claim her
own identity, but this is also a powerful exploration of female agency and the
forces - historical, cultural etc. - that have kept young women just like
Camila fixed in place. There are elements of this story that read like any teen
drama -real or fictional): familial conflict, disagreements between friends,
barriers to love - to name just three - but there are also very profound ideas
at work here and these ideas are explored in a sometimes nuanced manner.
Ultimately, it is a story of struggle and hope, not just for our young
protagonist, but for something better for us all as we move forward. I think
this would be an engaging read for young people to not only see themselves as
they are, but also see themselves as agents of change. Furia is our pick to move forward into the next round.
"Endless Kitten Videos"
In-Your-Face Realism vs. Escapism
It was during this phase of the discussion where the titular inspiration came about; a number of contributors have been yearning for literature that isn't about COVID or racism or some other hopeless and fractious theme: how about a book that, for example, relies on the beauty of the prose, or does delve into idyllic descriptions unironically? Where the plot might have its share of hardship and struggle, but each of the characters offers redeeming qualities, and things are tied up in a nice little bow in the end? This was the thrust of appeal that captured a sizeable amount of our participants: Wolk is known and has been lauded for her elegant and detailed historical fiction style, and the lessons learned in her stories are valuable and applicable but don't come attached with that soul-crushing energy that a lot of recent books seem to pack.
On the other hand, many ABMers felt that "Cranes" was a book that "needed to be out in the world." With its focus on the main Latinx character Betita and her family's harrowing experience in a US detention centre, many felt the themes and topics in this book are too important to ignore. Rather than shy away from hard realities, Salazar swoops into the heart of the hurt, much like her literary motif the crane would. Almost all acknowledged that escapist literature has its place, but the fact that this story, fictionalized but based on true events and experiences, cannot and should not be ignored.
Audience Considerations
This criterion is an important one: can the books I encounter during Smackdown be read by my students? Using my own class and grade as an example (such is the privilege exercised by the blogger, haha), Grade 6, "Echo", with its complex and mature writing style and its length (350+ pages), might prove to be a struggle for my emerging and struggling reader. Further, because the book does not offer a traditional antagonist (as it did so wonderfully and frighteningly with Betty Glengarry in Wolf Hollow), even read as a read-aloud this novel may not capture the imagination or the relevancy of an upper elementary audience.
"Cranes" has its share of difficulties as well. Its hard-boiled dedication to realistic themes and situations may put this in the "inappropriate" column for even the most astute and aware junior-highers, let alone my sixth graders. With depictions of sexual assault and abhorrent restroom conditions, as an example, this novel, as presently zeitgeist-y as it might be, could prove to inspire anxiety and squeamishness that many educators may use to declare the book out of bounds.
"Prose Pose"
Someone aptly quipped that "novels in verse are IN right now." How very true. Relying on the power of poetry gives the author a sense of freedom, artistic expression, and a sort of 'breeziness' while relinquishing none of the story's topical strength. As is the case with Salzar and "Cranes", the reader will certainly feel the pain, terror, and anxiety of the characters, while enjoying the unique enjambment choices of the author. "Echo", while relying on a more, dare I say it, traditional, conventional approach, loses nothing by way of style, thematic power, or artistry. Wolk paints the main character, Ellie, with a masterful brush, elegantly and poignantly taking us through her joys and struggles as she aptly embraces Depression-era rural life, while desperately and almost fervently searching for a cure for her comatose father. The other characters are well fleshed-out and sympathetic, and the descriptions of life on an unforgiving mountain are expertly depicted. Both writers are at the top of their game, as disparate as their approaches may be.
"Que?"
Another interesting point that came up with the use of Spanish in Land of the Cranes. Some readers felt the inclusion of Spanish or Spanglish elements made it difficult to comprehend without needing a dictionary or online reference tool. While this did not seem to deter most from enjoying the book or denying the relevancy or power of the inclusion of Spanish, it was an obvious roadblock. One participant said it made them empathize with the struggle of our ELL student population, while others compared it to similar difficulties found in the previous round when reading American As Paneer Pie. Others, however, armed with prior knowledge of the Romance languages, and, to a more limited degree, exposure to Spanish-language visual media, found the bilingualism either a non-issue or enjoyable. (I for one, gave myself a high-five when I remembered that dulzura (Spanish) means dolce (Italian- thanks, childhood piano lessons!) which means sweet in English.
Miscellaneous Tidbits...and the Conclusion
Finally, would Smackdown be Smackdown without the requisite:
- accusations of gaslighting?
- declarations of surprise and shame and disappointment in one's reading peers?
- (unwittingly) muted rants?
- dreams of post-Covid, in-person jabs?
Of course it wouldn't! And it all served to drive our conversation to its inevitable (yet still debatable) conclusion: Land of the Cranes flies off to the next round, as Echo Mountain remains, solid and steady as its story may be, relegated to the dustbin of histor(ical fiction). For some die-hard fans who would consider themselves "Wolk" or "Laurenites" to the extreme, Echo Mountain may be a candidate for the Zombie pick, but perhaps it's still too early to tell. :)
Its Banksy for us!
Me and Banksy by Tanya Lloyd Kyi vs. The Lion of Mars by Jennifer L. Holm
Friday, January 7, 2022
Entrapment Abounds!
Two great reads: one about Japanese-American teenagers forced into incarceration camps after Pearl Harbor, the other about the Thai boys' soccer team trapped in an underground cave in 2018.
We Are Not Free - Traci Chee
Although focused on the trials and tribulations of adolescents through the adolescent eye, mind, and language, this novel did surprise me at times with insight that resonated with my own experiences as an adult. For example, the description of life as people coming together and drifting apart, repeatedly, until no one is left.. And the deep and emotional attachment a person has to their “home” place, or any place that has temporarily been “home.” The characters soak in the small moments, the small joys and beauties and in-betweens of a life that is full of hardship, with a maturity that I would be thrilled to see reflected by today’s adolescents. These characters have a knack for seeing the richness of life, and it is written beautifully by Chee. I would love to dwell on some of these passages with students and have them draw insight into their own lives.
All Thirteen - Christina Soontornvat
This was a blistering read, as in, I didn’t move from my spot from cover to cover. The true story of survival from a nightmare situation was told concisely, but with enough detail to keep me enthralled in every moment. Soontornvat organized and delivered an astonishing number of perspectives and pieces of the event, and wove them together into a coherent narrative that continuously emphasized the complexity and enormity of the task at hand. Even though I knew what the final result would be (from watching the news and… the title), the unfolding of the weeks-long story provided so many details that I hadn’t heard before, but will now never forget. Thematically, human resilience, teamwork, hope against overwhelming odds, and the power of the human spirit are very accessible to students, and I think the vast majority would be captured by the action-packed intensity of the story itself to remain engaged. Of course, I immediately dove into a google rabbit hole looking for pictures and video footage (especially of the famous moment that the rescuers found the team), which is always a good sign.
The additional information interspersed throughout the story itself did come off as a bit school-textbook- “Did You Know?”-y and, I confess, I did skip some of them. But only because I couldn’t tear my attention away from the action! I can see most of them as being well-intentioned and useful blurbs to add cultural background for readers who are not familiar with Thailand, but some of them seemed like page fillers. Particularly the entire page dedicated to explaining the phrase, “Practice Makes Perfect.” At the height of the rescue, I did not have time for this!!
Actually.. I could totally see this book having a place in a Science classroom, during a unit that deals with weather/rainfall/erosion.. Perhaps even more so than the ELA classroom.
In conclusion… I found both of these to be engaging and historically-informative, but I am ultimately voting for We Are Not Free to move forward. The writing itself is richer and, IMO, offers more opportunities in the ELA classroom.
All Thirteen Are Free!
After a pretty m’eh first round, we have a finalist for last year’s (2020) National Book Award versus this year’s (2021) Kirkus winner.
I had a few qualms about both if I’m entirely honest. But nothing that would stand in the way of giving both a hearty YAAAAHHHHS.
Sidebar: HBO’s Station Eleven is currently giving me a lens through which to view our world right now, a way of generating hope and optimism, focussing on the truly kind and empathetic during times of crisis. In the spirit of this, I’m just going to say a few things that I love about both of these texts. That’s it. Just things I love.
Traci Chee’s We Are Not Free
I love the way that many characters get their chance to narrate a part of the text, each voice convincingly authentic and revealing. I love the way the organization of who “tells” the next piece allows the form of the novel to generate content: so many interesting parallels and juxtapositions; so many interesting ways in which characters and contexts and ideologies buffet against each other; so many Rashomon-ish moments of different people’s perspectives on the same incident. The seamless integration of both individual character voice and the voice of authorless authority.
I love the way that this, stealthily, reveals itself as a multimodal text…and each of those forms reveals something about theme and character. And history. And story.
I love how time works in this text. STICK AROUND FOR MY TED TALK ON HOW TIME WORKS IN THE SAME MANNER IN WE ARE NOT FREE AND THE THIRD SEASON OF SUCCESSION (I am not joking about this).
I really think there is a place for this book as a whole class novel, and would heartily recommend a class set or two (already purchased—bless you, Book Warehouse Christmas Season sales). I agree that engagement may be an issue if one just dropped it into students’ hands, but as a Teaching Text—pretty incredible, I think. Even the ways that the structure of the novel asks the reader to analyze initially at a micro- level, but eventually at a macro- level…man, give me a grade 10 class STAT.
Christina Soontornvat’s All Thirteen
Sidebar 2: see...this is non-fiction for Young Adults done right. No one needed to "fictionify" the account and to insert themselves first-person-style into the narrative to make this gripping and engaging. Just be well-written and researched and structured.
I loved (though…I see others sure didn’t--looking RIGHT. AT. YOU. HRYCUN.) the interstitial breaks in the narrative to elucidate on “Meditation” or tell me more about “Human Responses to Levels of Oxygen Concentration.” Maybe I’m a dummy, but I found them really interesting and illuminating. Like…perfectly spaced out. Timely (and…metaphoric and clever? “Rules To Dive By”? NOICE). I felt they proactively gave me the requisite “expertise” to sagely nod when experts were talking about ketamine. This personal expertise also appears after watching three hours of, say, Bobsledding during the Winter Olympics. Illusory sense of expertise, but just what I need!
I loved how invested I was. I love how many times I cried (like, really crying. Those notes on page 152? Saman Gunan? OOF. A full-blown mess, I was)). I loved that there were times, as I turned the page or came to the end of a chapter, I had a huge exhalation—because I had been holding my breath for way longer than I should have been.
I loved the precise craft of the thing. Not just the chapters (so cleverly considered!) and the look (the interaction between text and image!) and the feel (the physical weight of it in my hands!) of it—but there were sentences that truly made me gasp. Passages that I tagged for use as Mentor Texts.
I feel bad for the book in that The Rescue is such a hit right now, and documentaries are so widely available on streaming services that…I think lots will watch the movie rather than read the book (and the eventual [and pretty-much-inevitable] Oscar-nomination will cement this prediction). But…there’s lots the book does MUCH. BETTER. than the (pretty good, much-lauded) movie does, specifically the ways in which the boys and their families remain the focus— Soontornvat’s very personal interviews and research (THOSE SOURCE NOTES THO) speak to the story that she was committed to tell. And HOLY TOOT, does she ever.
Both are worth reading.
But my vote goes to We Are Not Free.






















