Is Revolution
A book I would recommend?
Probably to some.
French revolution,
Musical composition
Described in detail
Too detailed for me
Fact and fiction intertwined
Less fact more story!!
Is Okay For Now
A book I would recommend?
Depends on the kid.
Started off slowly,
Then rapidly captured me
Loved the voice of Doug
Laughed a bit in parts,
Teared up a bit in others
But end was too neat.
Though it’s hard to call
I’ll give my choice to go on
It’s Okay for Now
Let’s do a sonnet
Or some couplets the next time
Please no more Haiku!!
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ReplyDeleteI concur...my vote goes to Okay For Now.
ReplyDeleteTime travel for Yank
Revolution in Old France
So sad, heads will roll
V.S.
Abused boy, strong voice
finds art, friends, love - end result:
life is bird droppings.